Talk:RWBY/@comment-198.54.211.2-20181030120652/@comment-87.143.212.232-20190125001441

Untile the end of volume 2 or volume 3 RWBY was story wise good. The graphic wasn't on top, but the storytelling and the action worked. After Volume 3 the serie began to fall, which can clearly be seen on Adam. At the beginning he was a powerfull villain with a great motive. But more important, he was believable. In volume 4 he didn't really appear, which do not say, it's bad. I just want to mention it. But in volume 5 he was turned into a weak, incompetent and completely unbelieble motived charackter. In Volume 1-3 Adam fight for the right for all faunus. By doing so, he also use violence to destroy every human construction, which really or just may stand in the way, and if necessary, those Adam would even wipe out all humans for the faunus. The Adam of Volume 5 and ongoing was more like: "I super mega hyper angry just because Blake left me. Now I gonna start a world war, just because of this. No one going to stop me, unless those little mouse at the door!" And those happen to the whole storytelling. It's not really impressive anymore and the charackter motives became dump.

Also the interviews, mainly those of Miles Luna, were not good for the climate. Miles often said: "The next volume gonna be super epic, with much emotion and great view on the area."

The reallity was less. Far less. It was like you expect something like a Concord plane and you get a plane from WW 1.

Many very loyal fans says, the other fans expect to high and writing storys is really hard, but I can say, it's not as true as those fans think it is. It's only hard to write a crime story and storys with mindblowing twist. The first one need may more than one storyline to work good and the second need very much skill. But the other kinds of storys are easy as long as you use your brain and understand what the audience know and could guess base on what they know.